Tip: Don’t start multiple sentences or paragraphs with the same word, as in: she did this, she did that, she did something else, she… etc. Mix them up and start a few with something else. Otherwise it becomes repetitious for the reader and repetitious=boring.
Thought: “Dream no small dreams for they shall not have the power to move men.” – Goethe
Teaser: Finish this, using monk, magazine, imagination: I refused to fudge the numbers….